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He was always there, you just never noticed. Watching from the shadows of your home village, waiting for the day when he could sweep you away forever, to keep you, claim you as his. There was no way around the fact, he knew he had rekindled a deep affection for the Leaf Village kunoichi.

The way your (H/C) locks framed your face, how your (E/C) orbs twinkled when you smiled, even the small swaying motions that framed your hips when you walked drew him deeper and deeper into a frenzy. He had to have you. He just didn't know how to say it. Ever since the incident with his clan, and the knowledge given he had joined the Akatsuki leaked, he couldn't tell you how he felt. He would only be granted with hostility, and a scene would break out that would possibly end up with you attacking him.

You were a lost cause to him, but he couldn't believe it himself. So he would watch, follow you at a distance around your daily routines.

-Your POV-
"Oi!! (Name)!!" The voice called, alerting her from her thoughts on her way from the Market. She cocked her head as she saw the blonde sprinting in her direction, a grin on his face and waving like a maniac. As he approached, you noticed he didn't slow down a wink, this only meant he intended to...

"Not today!" You rumbled as you shifted to the right, slamming your elbow into the boy's rib cage, sending him flying a few feet back. He groaned and fell to his knees, gasping for breath.

"C-Come on.." He coughed and sputtered when he spoke, "You always do this.. Lighten up a bit (Name)."

"What?! Are you insane, Naruto?!" You motioned to the paper bag you were carrying. "If you had tackled me, my dinner for tonight would have been ruined!"

He rolled his eyes and rose to his feet, crossing his arms over his chest. "Yeah, right. I could have treated you if that happened."

Was he pouting now? Oh priceless...

"Thanks for the offer, but you would have to pay me back if you did so." You huffed and continued your stroll home. Naruto hop-stepped to catch up with you, groaning a long winded "Pleaseeeeeee."

"No, thank you. Now if you will excuse me," You darted forward with blinding speed. "I really have to get home! Bye, Naruto!"

Naruto stood in his place in shock but then stuck out his lower lip, turned his heel, and walked off in the opposite direction.

You hated to upset him like that.. But you just didn't have time for his antics tonight.
Gomen! Gomen! Gomen! 
I really hope you guys like it.... This is my first deviation.. Waaaah! 
Please let me know if there are any needed corrections and such ^~^
....I want to create a series soon... But it all depends on how this one turns out :happybounce: 

I do NOT own any of the characters, or the image.
You belong to Itachi :3
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Toyguy32 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Is this for actual pokemon or can it apply to characters as well?
CompleteAnimeAddict Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016
Part two please!! Very good!!(:
animeloverforeves Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
okay.i read the title and i blushed. Nice Story.
MzHydexx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!
animeloverforeves Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You did good.
mst88 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Oh gosh, being watched by Itachi! Squee for Hardrockangel  
EndingTheSolitude Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Ahhhhhh! It feels so different reading a deviation from someone I've known for eternity. It's excellent! Keep up the remarkable work. I expect amazing work from you. It's perfect, discarding a few grammar mistakes that you may prove me wrong with c:
MzHydexx Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhhhh! Arigatou gozaimasu!! Huggle! I love you so much! Please enjoy my deviations!I'm so very happy you enjoyed it! I was worried you wouldn't like it uwu.
Daisuki desu Anonymous-chan! Please, inform me of the mistakes, I would really love to correct and make this as good as it can get cx
Animefanforever101 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Please make a part 2 this is really good
MzHydexx Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm getting right on that dear c:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2] 
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